Ok, here are a few tips.
1. Don't post a ripoff animation, we don't accept that here. You should have shown respect than just doing that. That is just bad of you doing that.
2. Never submit an unfinished animation, we don't support it around here.
3. Don't make a fast commentary, i couldn't read it that fast. You should have slowed it down.
4. Stop being lazy and rushing it, that didn't look like it took you 6 months, that looked like it took you 2 weeks to make this. Don't even try to lie.
5. Work harder next time, you need to take time on finishing this, sprite animating may be hard but work harder.
I suppose you understand that you used those tips, if not then you better delete this animation of yours or your in big trouble, young man.